Hi Lukas, I absolutely love your little landing page! I’m instantly hooked and want to keep scrolling to find out more! It has a really playful feel to it! Your title, “Half-Human / Half-Designer,” immediately made me think of the amazing game Half Life. It’s perfect because you seem to be rooted in gaming, and your use of motion design reflects that. I think the small text under the title could be a little bigger, as it’s a little on the edge of legibility.
Although I like the size relation of the title and text, but I think it could be a bit more in balance with its function. If you want people to read the text, you might want to make a few adjustments. I also like the font you’ve chosen.
The real kicker, which explains you as a designer really well, is the video about you.
Entertaining, absolutely creative! I would put the video more in the center. Maybe make it a bit bigger. But I love it, and it immediately suggests that you are a fun guy to work with.
I think the dynamics you use in your narrative in the video could be picked up even better in the overview of your work. Maybe you could add a little more playfulness here. You could also work with “hover” effects in the desktop version and break up the rigid grid a little. After all, your style isn’t rigid like a grid; it’s very playful, fast, dynamic and moving.
I also thought at the beginning that clicking on an image in the grid would take me to a subpage with project information. Your costume cursor also makes me think the elements are clickable. I don’t think a subpage is necessary, but I have a feeling it doesn’t work ideally right now.
With two graphics, something actually happens: once an Instagram link, which is opened in the same tab, and once the picture gets bigger. You could decide whether this should happen for all or none of them. I could also imagine that it works well if you get at least a few details about each project. For example: “Poster design for…” Or “Personal graphic study”. Then potential clients would have a better overview of what areas of work you cover.
The footer is giving some more information and links, but the font size is again a little bit too tiny here.
In the mobile version, the focus is on your resume video, as the grid isn’t presented. Which I think is a good option if you don’t want to show all elements. However, I think you need a little more information, as not everyone wants to click “play” on a video if you are on your mobile device and prefers to “read” information. Maybe you could also put the title “Half Human Half Designer” and a small info text above the video to satisfy this.
Overall, a really great portfolio you got there! A little bit more fine-tuning and it gets even better!